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 ==== Station Decks ====
-Bastard Station was once very well-appointed and functional, but over the past few decades its functionality and promise has crumbled to ruin. It is made up of three main sections, each connected by a zero-gravity well.
+Bastard Station was once very well-appointed and functional, but over the past few decades its style and promise has crumbled to ruin. It is made up of three main sections, each connected by a zero-gravity well.
 The first section is the one that still sees a little upkeep, and has seen the most wear. It includes the following elements:
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   * The Mall - Banks of businesses were once honeycombed in this district of the station, now just dusty husks with the occasional squatter
   * Command - At the pinnacle of the station, the command deck that once directed ship traffic and co-ordinated public works and services of the installation is now the location of the bio-vats used to grow the biomass needed for survival by [[Happy Farmer]]
-  * Residence Ring - Cracked and failing, the outer residence ring of the station that once was used as personal space is now uninhabitable
+  * Residence Ring - Cracked and failing, riddled with holes like Swiss cheese, the outer residence ring of the station that once was used as personal space for its citizens is now uninhabitable
 The first and second section are connected by a zero-gravity well at the center of the station known colloquially as the "Bum Hole" because of the types of individuals who usually use it.
-The second section, once the military center of the installation, has fallen into desperate disrepair. Many of the features it once boasted are now open to space or radioactive death traps. However, at its peak this section had the following elements that could potentially be restored:
+The second section, once the military center of the installation, has fallen into desperate disrepair. Many of the features it once boasted are now open to space and/or radioactive death traps. However, at its peak this section had the following elements that could potentially be restored:
   * Drydocks - There were three docking slips that featured claws and gear to repair and re-engineer craft in deep space
-  * Weapons Arrays - Now stripped bare of all control and function, there were once five weapons rooms for station defense
+  * Gunnery Arrays - Now stripped bare of all control and weapons, there were once five emplacements to mount guns and torpedoes for station defense
-  * Warehouses - Zero gravity warehouses once stored banks of material, now these vaults are now empty and open to the vacuum of space once their seals and stays failed
+  * Warehouses - Zero gravity warehouses once stored banks of cubes of all types, but these vaults are empty and open to the vacuum of space once their seals and stays failed
   * Launch Rails - Tubes from the hangar deck still exist for fast interceptor deployment, despite being clogged with debris and the power lines stripped for parts
   * Salvage - Perhaps the last thing to go was the salvage unit, used to ingest raw ore or derelict ships for new manufacture